Reviews For Waterfall
Reviewer: ralx34 Signed
Date: 02/05/14 - 04:47 pm Title: Chapter 1

great story, I love all your 4 stories

 

Hope one day you'll give us another one !

 

Alexandra

Reviewer: Patti Signed
Date: 28/06/10 - 08:15 pm Title: Chapter 1

This was very sweet.  The imagery of the waterfall and its possibilities was awesome!

Author's Response: Thanks! You know you could take it from there and do a 'sequal' of sorts where they enjoy the waterfall~  and or a trip to hawaii...oh no, a story is forming in my head now....if you're game to brainstorm and write let me know!

Reviewer: charlie Signed
Date: 28/06/10 - 02:50 am Title: Chapter 1


Nice story.  You have some of the gestures, phrasing etc of the characters down pat.  I like the end part when he was talking to Billy.  Very real.

 Good job - post more!



Author's Response: Thanks! I just reread it myself! LOL! I really need to set aside some me time to write!

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