great story, I love all your 4 stories
Hope one day you'll give us another one !
Alexandra
great story, I love all your 4 stories
Hope one day you'll give us another one !
Alexandra
This was very sweet. The imagery of the waterfall and its possibilities was awesome!
Author's Response: Thanks! You know you could take it from there and do a 'sequal' of sorts where they enjoy the waterfall~ and or a trip to hawaii...oh no, a story is forming in my head now....if you're game to brainstorm and write let me know!
Good job - post more!